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| | AAMEEN KHAN | 04:21:42 PM | 05/Sep/08
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| | |   zelon
DREAM SELLERS
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Yahaan Sapane Kharide
Jaatey hai; Beche Jaatey
hai...... AUR Repair Bhi
Hotey hai....... | |
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Thanx suman ....... you are always prompt in commenting on my poems. |
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| | Shreya Tiwari | 06:28:06 PM | 04/Sep/08
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Writing Hindi Poems &
Songs. I write songs and
lyrics for films, this I
do just for fun. I do it
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Suman I think you have forgotten me. Aap ne mujhe bhula diya ....I miss you and your comments. |
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| | AMEEN KHAN | 11:33:56 AM | 04/Sep/08
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| | | zelon
DREAM SELLERS
INTERNATIONAL ::::::
Yahaan Sapane Kharide
Jaatey hai; Beche Jaatey
hai...... AUR Repair Bhi
Hotey hai....... | |
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Good Morning Suman and thanx for your comments on my poem. You are always prompt in commenting. |
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| | AAMEEN KHAN | 03:07:16 PM | 03/Jul/08
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| | | zelon
DREAM SELLERS
INTERNATIONAL ::::::
Yahaan Sapane Kharide
Jaatey hai; Beche Jaatey
hai...... AUR Repair Bhi
Hotey hai....... | |
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I want to bring to your attention that Mr. Iftekhar Ahmed has stolen my poem and published on his name. Today he has done this with me tomorrow he may do the same thing with u people also.... Please request him to delete my poem HAQEEQAT from his iland. As u know I have written this poem long back and you all my dear friends have commented also. I have already told him.....but I feel if he is pressurised, then he may not dare to do such things in future. His URL is : Iftekhar.rediffiland.com
Please help me out…. Regards ……………………aameen
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| | AAMEEN KHAN | 10:34:44 AM | 06/Jun/08
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| | | zelon
DREAM SELLERS
INTERNATIONAL ::::::
Yahaan Sapane Kharide
Jaatey hai; Beche Jaatey
hai...... AUR Repair Bhi
Hotey hai....... | |
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Hi suman dear thanx a lot for your beautiful comments. Good morning and have a wonderful day ahead. |
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| | Shreya Tiwari | 12:16:16 PM | 22/May/08
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| | | Mumbai
Writing Hindi Poems &
Songs. I write songs and
lyrics for films, this I
do just for fun. I do it
for part time. | |
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Hi Suman..!!
Thanks a ton. I am really your fan...you always appreciate my poetry. That is the reason I am writting better for you. Suman I am sharing 4 lines with you........,
yun to har kavi ke kuchh apne yatn hua karte hai..,
kavita likhne ke bhi to kuchh dhang hua karte hai..!!
jo apni kavitaon par khud magn hua karte hai..
or shrota hi samman na de.......
to kavi ke prayas jagat me vyarth hua karte hai.
Keep reading.....
Shreya Tiwari
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| | Shreya Tiwari | 11:13:48 AM | 12/May/08
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| | | Mumbai
Writing Hindi Poems &
Songs. I write songs and
lyrics for films, this I
do just for fun. I do it
for part time. | |
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Hi Suman
Thanks a lot !! you never forget to write a comment for my poem. I appreciate it and I am obliged.........!! Thank you once again.
------Shreya Tiwari
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| | Shreya Tiwari | 11:11:39 AM | 12/May/08
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| | | Mumbai
Writing Hindi Poems &
Songs. I write songs and
lyrics for films, this I
do just for fun. I do it
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Thanks a lot Suman. You never forget to write a comment for my poem. I appreciate it...and I am obliged. Thank you once again.......!!
Shreya Tiwari
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| | AAMEEN KHAN | 12:31:39 PM | 05/May/08
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| | | zelon
DREAM SELLERS
INTERNATIONAL ::::::
Yahaan Sapane Kharide
Jaatey hai; Beche Jaatey
hai...... AUR Repair Bhi
Hotey hai....... | |
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Hello dear suman........Thanx for your comments on my poem. Your comments are always good and nice to read....Today my net is giving me problems.. |
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| | Shreya Tiwari | 11:24:30 AM | 30/Apr/08
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| | | Mumbai
Writing Hindi Poems &
Songs. I write songs and
lyrics for films, this I
do just for fun. I do it
for part time. | |
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Dear Suman
Thanks for appreciating. Your comments and appreciations teach me....how to write best. Of course you can spread this poem, I wrote this poem for my country....And as I said....." Meri Kavita yadi desh ki ek beti ko bhi bachayegi...meri kavita dhanya ho jayegi" ..............Ek putri bhi bachaa sake...kavita teri safal tiwari ho......!!
In this modern era..it is happening, pragnent ladies go for ultrasound, and if they come to know that there is female in the womb...they prefer to go for abortion..........
-------Shreya Tiwari |
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